When you previously sent me this all of it was so scrambled and distorted that I could not make sense of what you intended to portray, still some of the elements do feel off but how you have woven your shattering belief in god with your mother and gluttony with the dog is the reason i admire your writing. This may not be as good as your previous ones but atleast you wrote something, that's such a plus point!!
Only healthy critcism tho, i know you understand hehe, well done sakshi🫶🏻!!
Slander of God and mother in one post??? I am being spoileddd 😭💗💗
I loved it all so much but the tree part is my favourite for some reason, also that little girl saying "one must find the stars on their own" just made me cryyy
I could have pointed out the lines that shook me with their realness, but there were just too many. It was more than just a read, it was a bowl full of realisations that I am too afraid to drink.
I am sure I am real, and I must tell you that 'everything will be okay'.
immediately
i luv this so much
thankyou 🫶
When you previously sent me this all of it was so scrambled and distorted that I could not make sense of what you intended to portray, still some of the elements do feel off but how you have woven your shattering belief in god with your mother and gluttony with the dog is the reason i admire your writing. This may not be as good as your previous ones but atleast you wrote something, that's such a plus point!!
Only healthy critcism tho, i know you understand hehe, well done sakshi🫶🏻!!
thankyou for reading and your criticism ayush, i too am not really fond of this one but anything to get out of that block will try better next time 😋🫶
This one has some of my favourite lines you've ever written I'm going to think about them throughout the day man
best compliment ever. thankyou aruu 💋💋
Slander of God and mother in one post??? I am being spoileddd 😭💗💗
I loved it all so much but the tree part is my favourite for some reason, also that little girl saying "one must find the stars on their own" just made me cryyy
I could have pointed out the lines that shook me with their realness, but there were just too many. It was more than just a read, it was a bowl full of realisations that I am too afraid to drink.
I am sure I am real, and I must tell you that 'everything will be okay'.